Conrad Rice

Hi Angel! Sorry it took so long to get to this, I've been busy with school work and NaNo. But I'm here now, eager and ready to review! So, there's ...

Hello, Pork! I will be your reviewer for today. Yay! Now, this is an interesting way to write this. I won't say that I like it, but it does work, ...

Hi Angel! Here's my review for part two! I couldn't find any glaring errors in it, this is a solid chapter. I'm still interested in how these two characters are ...

Hi Angel. This is the first of your five critiques you won. Yay! I'll be reviewing the second chapter of this later on. So, I noticed a problem in your ...

Hi Clo! You get a review from me today! I really liked this poem. It had a sort of simplicity and innocence to it that really drew me in. I ...

Hi Suzanne! Since I'd heard so much about this poem from you, I figured I would try to review it. Anyway, this is interesting matter for a poem. I rather ...

Hi Imp! I'll be your first reviewer, methinks. four your health, for our city. That should be a for, not a four. But it's a small goof. Overall, I think ...

Well well well Ky. Here it is. Journey's end. A tale is rather like a journey, at least in my head. Our little friend Charlie certainly went on a journey, ...

Clo. Clo Clo Clo Clo Clo. Such a wonderful name. Rolls right off the tongue. Anyways, since you were so nice and reviewed a poem of mine without me even ...

Hi Imp, I would have to say that this is a good piece. It had very beautiful imagery, and I liked how the city referenced the fact that it was ...

Hi Jiggity. I rather liked this piece. You touched on the city as a whole being defined by the people who live within it, their hopes and their dreams. It's ...

Oh. My. Goodness. This was good, Ky. Very good. Superb even. The only bone I've got to pick with you in this whole thing is the first part, where it's ...

It's me, Ky! Your ever-faithful Dr. Watson-er, Conrad Rice! I stole that from your review of The Masquerade Part 1, ha ha. Anyways, this was a much better representation of ...

Hi Ky. I'm here for my review of part 15. This was an improvement from part 14, a definite improvement. Peter actually seemed like a real person to me this ...

So, Part II of this little tale begins. And here I am to review. Sorry it took me so long. I got Xbox Live recently and I've been having fun. ...